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6/27/2018

Hooked on Imprisoned in Stone, Nightime Visitor, #MFRWHooks

For the next several weeks, the posts will showcase magic of a darker kind. Imprisoned in Stone. For the crime of healing without payment, the Brethren imprisoned Dylan’s soul in stone. Every full moon, they awakened him and renewed the bonds. In last week's post, Dylan vowed vengeance and he cast our his senses for help to free him from his imprisonment. This week, as his awareness faded, his mind touched another's.

Excerpt:


Maerva opened eyes to a darkness, not only of her room, but of the soul. The sense of a presence held her motionless, even though she knew no entry was possible through the closed door or shuttered window. Air whispered over her skin as if someone touched her cheek. A breath later, the impression of an intruder vanished.

The roar of waves crashing against the cliff, something she had heard since birth, comforted Maerva and pushed away the residual fear. Deep breaths removed more of the tension from her body, even though her skin remained clammy from perspiration. The moon reappeared from behind its filtering curtains of haze. No longer obscured, the low-hanging globe sent a shaft of white light streaming through the window. The beam moved up the wall beyond her bed, turning the darkness into a shadowed frame. Glimmering letters written by a ghostly hand resolved into words.


     They are coming.
       I can sense the presence of the Brethren.
      They murdered my son... my wife.
      They are coming–the ones who killed me!


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7 comments:

  1. Wow. Very intriguing snippet. Tweeted.

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    1. Thanks for the kind word. Imprisoned in Stone is a change of pace for me. It's a lot darker than the other books I've written and has a few surprises.

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  2. Atmospheric and spooky! Out of curiosity, because I'm always interested in names, how do you envisage "Maerva" being pronounced? With a long a or long i?

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    1. In my mind I pronounce it may-er-va. But my pronunciation of gaelic name isn't always true to the homeland.

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  3. Wow that last line. Holy cow. Quite a hook!

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  4. Woh, what a hook! I love the spooky atmosphere of this quote. Tweeted.

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