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Today's excerpt is from the fantasy romance Hatchling's Mate. To set, the scene, To
set the scene, against all orders, Talann attempts to swim across a
flooded river to save women and children stranded on a hill. (Crossing Halted). His ribs are broken by debris. (A Question Answered) Some help arrives (Unexpected Help), but it isn't enough. (Dive Deep) The crossing continues with unexpected help from dragonkind. (Crossing Continues)
After following the crossing for so long, it wouldn't be fair to you, the reader, not to tell you Talann's future ... at least for now.
And now the Sunday Snippet.
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Excerpt
Gathering strength, Talann pushed back the redness still clouding his consciousness. One by one, other sensations penetrated his awareness. An iron grip suspended him above the waves, high enough to breathe, although spray stung his eyes. Movement replaced the feeling of weightlessness. Mud sucked at his hands. Pebbles scraped his knuckles and snatched at his feet.
Huffs of breath in his ear let Talann know the price of the effort being made to shift his not insubstantial frame up the bank. ...
Muirea laid Talann on the ground beneath a tree with the effortlessness of a woman placing a babe in a cradle.
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I hope you like the snippet I shared for Talann / Glynnes this week. Be sure to read the other Weekend Writing Warriors blogs and the #SnippetSunday authors for more great reads.
~till next time, Helen
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