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8/01/2018

Hooked on Imprisoned in Stone, Magic or Men, #MFRWHooks

In the previous weeks, excerpts focused on Maerva's introduction to magic. Now a change of focus from the dark fantasy to romance. Follows is an excerpt that introduced two of the three men in Maerva’s life.

Excerpt:

Maerva stood on the threshold of the hut while Colwynn prepared the arena. With each rune he sketched, her skin tingled from the gathering magic. The air sparkled with his power. When the torches flared to life, her body warmed as if she nestled in a bed of hot coals. She had never before felt such an attraction to a man. Was the firestorm in her veins the result of her magic calling out to his–or her womanhood responding to a magic as ancient as time?

A draft followed Gareth into the room and the chill returned Maerva to a semblance of control. Despite the ease with which he carried the canvas sack, it bulged from the weight within. He dropped it to the floor in a loud clank. His hands free, he stripped off his heavy garment and tossed it in a corner. Bowing to Tralin and Maerva he murmured, “I hope it won’t affront."

Additional waves of energy raced up Maerva’s back. But why? None of the other men of her acquaintance had ever affected her this way. Between swimming and sails on Wayward Bound, it was not as if she had not seen a man’s naked chest.

Gareth noted the way Maerva’s gaze shifted from him back to Colwynn. As he had numerous times since the mage appeared on Tralin’s doorstep, Gareth cursed his lack of powers. Maerva will be a great wizard one day. I will never be a suitable match for her. Frustration fueled the anger until it became a simmering rage.

“Gareth,” Tralin said, “are there any changes you want made to the arena?”

“No, thank you, Mistress Tralin. There is ample room to move, and the sawdust will provide good footing.”

Forcing a tight control over his emotions, Gareth laid out the weapons to be tested. A wave of his hand offered Colwynn first choice.

Colwynn made a show of selecting one of the lighter swords. “This weapon is nicely balanced.” Just the way Colwynn held the blade told a lot about the other man’s experience and training–or lack thereof.

Gareth’s lips tweaked in a smile. I might not be able to have Maerva, but I am under no compulsion to make it easy for Colwynn. Stooping down, he rose in fluid motion with a sword in his hand. He tipped the blade in salute, first to Tralin and then Colwynn. Three strides and he stood in the middle of the room. His muscles rippled from the weight of the blade as he twirled it through a series of one-handed figure eights.

All motion stopped, turning him into a grim-faced statue. Light glinted off the hilt that now hovered at shoulder height. The steel shaft pointed on a straight line to Colwynn’s head. “Your move, my friend,” Gareth said.

Colwynn rushed. His sword struck Gareth’s block. Again and again, the two men sparred. The sound of metal against metal mingled with the grunt of men. With each attack and counter, the fight grew more vicious. Gareth used his heavier weight to force Colwynn back. When the next blow landed, the flat of the blade struck bone not metal.

Maerva’s gasp cracked the control Gareth held over his anger.

Let’s see how much Maerva wants Colwynn when he’s bruised and bloodied.


Four paths--one destiny. With the power to bind souls and control all magic in the balance.

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Imprisoned in Stone--available at Amazon, Barnes and Noble, Kobo and elsewhere. Excerpts, a free read of the first chapter, and buy links available here.

14 comments:

  1. Ooh, I really like Gareth. Love a man who can use a sword

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    1. And he can make them also. Good with his hands in more than one way.

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  2. Like the sword fight bit and Gareth is my choice. Sword fights are fun to design. I've been known to use my epee to stage them.

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    1. Wish I could use an epee. A family member tried to show me how to use one once. But I do better with a broadsword or throwing a knife. Or bow and arrow.

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    1. I enjoyed writing the scene. Thanks for stopping by.

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  4. Oh wow - jealous much? Dangerous man.

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    1. One man is dangerous with a blade, the other with magic. At least Maerva is mature enough not to reward either man for acting childish. Thanks for stopping by.

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  5. Gareth is definitely a dangerous man, as Kayelle says. But I have a sense he's much more settled once he knows he is _the_ guy...hm.

    Loved the excerpt, Helen!

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    1. Both men are good men, and I will say the two men do become friends, however it would spoil things to say who "is the guy". glad you liked the excerpt.

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  6. Love the fight excerpt. This sounds exciting.

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  7. Great description of the sword fight.

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    1. Thanks for the kind words since they came from someone who is so good at descriptions.

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